Friday, October 1, 2010

The Murrain Night!

One very spooky Halloween, a little boy and his friends went out for a fun night of trick-or-treating.Little did they know , it would be a night they would never forget.
       At first everything was fine!They were getting lots of candy as they went from house to house.They passed other trick-or-treaters along the way.They saw funny costummes and scary costumes.They were having a fun time.
        But then, a huge shadow made them stop laughing and walking memly.They froze for a moment because a strange thought crossed their mind."The spirit of Oliver Jones".This man was a murderer and one day, he went to the big precipt river of the city.He was wanted for commiting another crime, but he suddenly slipped and he gasped for breath.According to the myth, his spirit comes on the earth again every Halloween and he kills children.The little boy and his friends ran away to escape, but it was too late.Oliver Jone's spirit was ready to kill those those children and nobody could stop it.He picked up the little boy and he strangle it....
         The other kids where very lucky.But the poor little had a very slow death.I wish I could help this boy to escape.....But, everything is over now!


  1. What a a scary story!! It gave me the creeps! It certainly had an unexpected ending...

  2. I know!Haha...when i was writing this story i was very scared!But i am glad that you scared because that is the point!